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Subject: Clay bodies

Author:
Arunansu

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Date Posted: 23:31:42 01/13/08 Sun

You massage me,
lay me centered;

then a sudden thrust,
and I start to spin.

Savoring the warmth of crafty hands
that control me,
my form,
I feel as a ballet dancer
pirouetting
to your tune.

Ah!
The way
that thumb stabs inside,
the way the crater expands,

the way you squeeze
-pull up my walls

make me dizzy.

You take me out
of your wheel, at last

I�m up for drying,

for sale.

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[> Subject: Re: Clay bodies
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 01:12:56 01/14/08 Mon Superb Narrative of a pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Clay bodies
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 01:16:57 01/14/08 Mon Thanks, DSL. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Clay bodies
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:58:24 01/14/08 Mon Your poetry enriches us all. Your attention and expression of detail is truly admirable. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Clay bodies
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:45:47 01/14/08 Mon This is awesome Arun, i really felt like i was the clay being formed into a pot.. i read it twice, you truly brought the experience of pottery to us. Love it much. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Clay bodies
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:47:21 01/14/08 Mon Glad that you people liked it. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]