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Subject: Mask

Author:
Arunansu

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Date Posted: 00:09:46 12/30/07 Sun

I appear distorted in my mirror.

My exterior senses
the growing need
of cleansing me,
inside out.

Inside pleads,
�Hush!
Keep hidden agendas secret,
between you and me�

My inner Me,
Your inner You,
our apparels in between.

Inward faces
remain unseen to each other,

on either side
of our outward show.

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[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:48:02 12/30/07 Sun ~ so sad that some feel that a Mask is needed how are people to know who they're dealing with? :) you've captured this masking of hidden agendas well, Arun well done! hugs Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:29:44 12/30/07 Sun Can truly understand this Arun, seems many feel the need to wear a mask but eventually the mask will come off. Awesome write Arun, i much enjoyed. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:16:02 12/30/07 Sun Thanks, Sasha, Janel. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: Sasha (Awarded) [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:00:55 01/13/08 Sun ~ I really love how you've penned this one, Arun I can see your poetic growth from when I first read you at another place and it is very pleasing to see, my friend...well done!!! Your poem is now hanging proudly in the... Muse Mongers Awards Hall hugs Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 23:25:00 01/13/08 Sun I feel honoured. You know, it is encouragement that i NEED the most. I didn't know that I can write, even two years before! [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Mask
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:59:41 01/14/08 Mon Another fine poem! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]