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Subject: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 17:11:50 01/11/08 Fri

Please Be Sharp



I am not a good asker,
though I never consciously
conspire to martyr myself,

my body or soul, any part
with delusional thinking

some may wish me to.
If someday, tragically,
I was to be separated,

clean cut at the left wrist
torso going one way in fear

appendage another, twitching,
I may seek help,
question one above,

please give me a hand
boost me to the top again.



Bobby
2oo8

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 17:49:10 01/11/08 Fri



Bobby,

Love the voice here!

We all find that place at the bottom
of our hearts and souls sometimes.

So very well done!

thanks,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 06:02:39 01/13/08 Sun

Thanks for the visit and supportive comment Andy!

Smile!
Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Good Knight
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Date Posted: 19:02:28 01/11/08 Fri

You are boosted and boost my spirit with awesome words

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[> [> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 06:03:26 01/13/08 Sun

Your comment has boosted me also my friend, thanks!

Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 22:44:58 01/11/08 Fri




~ oh yeah I can definitely remember feeling torn in all directions

and just wanting to reach for a hand up, from off the ground

feeling this one, my dear friend

*warm hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 06:04:42 01/13/08 Sun

Hiya Sasha!!

Big hugs ((((Sasha)))) for you for the wonderful comment.
Glad you enjoyed, thank you!

Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 17:43:22 01/12/08 Sat

Bobby,

Once more you prove why you are such a good poet, filling my mind with such profound thoughts,

Peace and hope,

Paul

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[> [> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 06:06:01 01/13/08 Sun

Hi Paul

I am honored you enjoyed my little spill of words!
Your comment has smiled me large, thanks!

Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 07:44:23 01/13/08 Sun

Letting go can be difficult, but there will always be something or someone to lend a hand. Read this one several times - much enjoyed.

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Sasha (Journey to the Light Award)
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Date Posted: 20:07:10 01/13/08 Sun


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This one called me back, Bobby...

a wonderful poem that paints a picture with depth and feeling

your poem is now proudly hanging in the...

Muse Mongers Awards Hall


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*hugs*

Sash xx



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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Mireille
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Date Posted: 17:51:37 01/14/08 Mon

Good to read your talent didn't fade, Bobby.

Really enjoyed this powerful expression of yourself.

Congrats on this award.

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[> Subject: Re: Please Be Sharp


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 20:36:01 01/14/08 Mon

You can count on me Bobby. (Huggs)

Love this much,
Janel

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