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Date Posted: 09:05:57 04/20/09 Mon
Author: Jefferson F. Rosa
Subject: Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5 - Corrections
In reply to: Aarah Long 's message, "Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5" on 03:55:01 04/20/09 Mon

Hi, Aarah Long, how are you?
I hope you're well.
My partners didn't still do the task five, so I choosed your task to correct.
Here are some mistakes made by you:
1. We don't say "Em Las Cruces nós tem cada estação; eles são outono, inverno, primavera, verão", but the correct is "Em Las Cruces, nós temos quatro estações: outono, inverno, primavera e verão". The verb "ter" agree with the pronoun "nós" and the word "estação" may to be write in plural "estações", because there are four seasons.
2. Instead of writing "Quando esta chuvando gosta de dormir e fico em meu casa", it's better to write "Quando está chovendo, eu gosto de dormir e fico em minha casa".
3. Instead of saying "Quando esta uma dia perfeito gosta de toma passeio longo", I think it's better to say "Quando está um dia perfeito, eu gosto de fazer um passeio longo".

Have a nice week,
See you,
Jefferson.

>Em Las Cruces nós tem cada estação; eles são outono,
>inverno, primavera, verão. Mas Pra muito de tempo esta
>quente e seco e em na primavera está ventando.
>
>Quando esta chuvando gosta de dormir e fico em meu
>casa. Quando esta muito fria não quero ser externa.
>Quando esta calor gosta de dirigir por toda cidade.
>Quando esta uma dia perfeito gosta de toma passeio
>longo.

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  • Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5 -- Pamela (Answer), 08:26:42 05/04/09 Mon
  • Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5 -- Aarah Long (Correcsão pra Pam), 01:15:08 05/06/09 Wed
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