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Date Posted: 14:18:48 04/22/09 Wed
Author: Marina
Subject: Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5
In reply to: Yonseili Flores 's message, "Re: Task 5/Tarefa 5" on 22:33:39 04/20/09 Mon

Hi Yonseili, thank you very much for your correction! I didn't know in New Mexico you didn't have snow, that's such an interesting thing... I thought it snowed all over the USA.

My suggestions for your text:

1) Verbs in Portuguese must "follow" (I don't know which word I can use for "concordar") the substantives, so if the substantive is plural, the verb must be like that also: "Os invernos não parecem..."

2) Using the same rule as above... "E os verões são super quentes"

3) It would be better to remove the indefinite article of the following setence: from "eu não sou um fã" to "eu não sou fã". It's not wrong, it just sounds better!

See you on the next step!

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