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Date Posted: 15:25:33 02/07/02 Thu
Author: Winter
Subject: Poems, would like some critisism or complements, you decide...

I write poems, short stories, etc. as a hobby, here's a few of my finest, give me all ya got, I'm ready for it.

The Galaxy Quest(for lack of a better title)
My ship is in Hyperspace after a nice little fight
My mission: Save the universe; my boss ain't very bright
My question is the same: Can I go home now?
No, gotta save the universe, wish that I knew how
My ship is really crummy,
My boss is really a dummy
I wonder, "What was he thinking?"
That useless dumb danger light is incessantly blinking,
My ship's a rusty bucket o' bolts;
My superiors are dolts.
Gotta save the galaxy, cuz bad guys are dumb,
Hope H.Q. has plenty o' coffee, cuz I really need some.

The Cat (dedicated to my own snotty kitty who is now glaring at me)

She sits in a window, her green eyes stare
She calls to the mouse, "Come closer if you dare"
Her fur golden brown, striped and soft as down
Her whiskers white and wiry, I drew a scetch of her in my diary
Her delicate cream paws, fortunatly they lack their claws
Beautiful like a Mink, with a temper to boot,
Now that I've insulted her, she biting on my foot

Star Light Intruder (dedicated to my pony:-)
When of gold, you think of money
Color of the sun, smoother than honey
But my gold whickers, and neighs in the night
Her red gold sheen, her star snowy white
Star Light Intruder, brighter than the Stars
I'd rather have her, than a million fancy cars
Sweet as honey, swift as the tide
First time I saw, man I thought I'd died!
True to her name, she outshines the moon
I'm the happiest girl, for she'll be mine soon.
Her centered white star, her velvety golden hide
She's my treasure, my golden joy and pride

Please, if you haven't been bored to sleep, tell me what you think of my writings... T/Y to y'all!
Winter

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