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Subject: grammar


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huggy
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Date Posted: 06/25/03 2:41pm
In reply to: PAUL 's message, "Thats about the sickest post Ive ever read." on 06/ 6/03 8:35pm

>My sisters retarded and shes deserves the life
>shes living a lot more than morons like you-I cant
>believe your being allowed to post this trash.
>
The proper way to phrase this would have been as follows

My sister is retarded, and she deserves the life she's living a lot more than morons like you; I can't believe you're being allowed to post this trash.

you have an option of a semicolon or a period after "like you"

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