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Ginger
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Date Posted: 23:39:50 01/04/26 Sun
Ok,I re-read everything, and I actually think it holds together better than I did the first time around. I really enjoyed the peeks into what big brother Lucas was thinking, and how he is getting more confident with being the disciplinarian when he has to. I think the turning point was when you asked me to decide how many I deserved with the hairbrush. That led to my own self reflection and the second spanking the next day, and then to the call with the mom. We had both made the mom sound a bit scary, and I was glad to soften that a bit with her being reasonable about the whole situation. You really struck a great balance between the loving older brother and the authority figure doling out punishment. One of my favorite parts, is that you truly were able to let things go after the spanking was over. One of the things I hated most about being in trouble when I was a kid was the tension that seemed to last for days.
Speaking of when I was a kid, this was based a little bit on real events. When I was in middle school, (I'm guessing age 11 or 12), one day my dog got out. I was in school, and I got a notice to go to the front office. I couldn't imagine why I might be in trouble, but I was automatically nervous anyway. I got to the office, and the secretary told me that my mom was on the phone for me. Now I was worried that something bad had happened. So, I picked up the phone, and she was just livid. She said that I left the door from the house to garage wide open when I left to walk to school that morning, and that my dog had gotten out. She said he was gone because of my carelessness. I don't remember exactly how she phrased it, but I think she said that she was going to "beat my ass" when I got home. Then, I spent the rest of the day worrying about my dog and dreading what awaited me at home. Well, she drove around the neighborhood, and found the dog. He was just fine. And she didn't spank me. I'm guessing she calmed down in the hours since her call. But it was tense for a while. To this day, I honestly don't think I left the door open. It just makes no sense. I think SHE probably left the door open if she went out to the garage to do laundry or something. But anyway, that was the inspiration for this scenario.
I'm totally down for being the brat-taming nanny, lol. No rush at all. Whenever you're feeling ready, just start a new thread, and I'll check in every few days.
Ginger
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