| Subject: ~Caught Up In The Fast Lane~ *story* |
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Date Posted: 12:45:49 12/28/01 Fri
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Dawn
's message, "~Caught Up In The Fast Lane~ *story*" on 12:31:57 12/28/01 Fri
~A week later VoShonne went out to Teena's house to pick up Dyamond. Teena answered the door.~
Teena: Hey VoShonne. How you doing?
VoShonne: I'm aight. You?
Teena: I'm fine.
VoShonne: Coo. Dyamond ready?
Teena: She's getting the rest of her stuff. You can come in.
VoShonne: Thanx. ~stepping into the house~
Dyamond: Daddy! ~running to VoShonne~
VoShonne: Hey Lil Mama. ~picking her up~ Wuz up?
Dyamond: Nothing.
VoShonne: You ready to go? ~putting her down~
Dyamond: Un huh. Where we going?
VoShonne: I was thinking we would go to Coney Island.
Dyamond: Yea! ~jumping up and down~
~VoShonne was looking at Dyamond and started to get a smile on his face.~
Dyamond: What cha smiling bout?
VoShonne: Just noticing how much you look like your mother.
Dyamond: How's that?
VoShonne: ~looking at Teena~ Because you're both beautiful.
~Teena looked up and kinda blushed. They stared at each other for a moment. Neither knowing what to say.~
Dyamond: ~looking back and forth between the two~ Daddy. Mommy? Daddy!
VoShonne: Huh? What is it? Wuz up?
Dyamond: Why are you looking at Mommy like that?
VoShonne: Because… because I miss her.
Dyamond: See! I told you Mommy and you said…
Teena: Girl be quiet and get the rest of your stuff.
Dyamond: Yes ma'am. ~walking out the room~
VoShonne: So what are you gonna do today?
Teena: Sit at home and relax.
VoShonne: Why don't you come with us?
Teena: Naw, I don't think so.
VoShonne: Come on. Go with us. Please! ~smiling at her~
Dyamond: ~walking back in the room~ Yeah Mommy. Please?
Teena: You know what? I can't stand y'all. I'll go.
VoShonne: Good. Lets go.
~They all left and had a good time. VoShonne told Teena about his new job and she was happy for him. They went out to dinner and it was just like old times.~
~Traci was sitting at home watching t.v. with Teena and Tayvia. Tayvia was crawling around the room looking at things. She came to a picture of Traci and Zane.~
Tayvia: ~pointing~ Dada?
Traci: OMG! What did you say? ~running to Tayvia~
Tayvia: Dada!
Traci: Ahh! ~picking her up and spinning around~ My baby can talk! ~phone started ringing~ Teena can you get that?
Teena: Sure. ~picking up the phone~ Hello.
MV: Hey T. Is Traci home?
Teena: Yeah, hold on. Trac, phone.
Traci: Hello.
MV: Hey girl.
Traci: Hey Z! Guess what.
Zane: What?
Traci: Tayvia just said dada today!
Zane: Really?!
Traci: Yeah. Let me see if I can get her to say it again.
~She tries for a minute and a half but Tayvia doesn't say anything.~
Zane: It's aight. She'll say it again sometime.
Traci: I'm sorry.
Zane: Naw, it's coo. I just wish I could've been there.
Traci: Yeah. So wuz up?
Zane: Nothing. Just calling to check up on you and the kids.
Traci: We're fine. Still trying to get use to this apartment.
Zane: Oh. Where's Tayvion?
Traci: Dawn took him and Dyamond out.
Zane: Well, that's all I wanted so I guess I'll talk to you later.
Traci: Okay. ~kinda sad~ I'll talk to you later then.
Zane: Aight. Umm Trac?
Traci: Yeah?
Zane: I miss you. I'll call you later this week.
Traci: Okay. And Z… I miss you too. Goodbye.
Zane: Bye.
~Traci hung up and fell back on the couch.~
Teena: What's wrong with you?
Traci: I don't know how much longer I can last.
Teena: What are you talking about?
Traci: I miss Zane. I miss being at home with him. I don't know how long I can go on like this.
Teena: Just backwards. When you was with him you couldn't wait to leave and now you can't wait to go back. But you ain't the only one.
Traci: So you feeling the same way too?
Teena: Hell yeah. I miss Shonne. When we took Dyamond to Coney Island it was just like old times. Like the innocent times in high school.
Traci: So what are we going to do?
Teena: Sit back and pray they come to their senses quick!
~Cornell was at home with Jajuan. They were on the couch watching t.v.~
Jajuan: Daddy?
Cornell: Wuz up Jay?
Jajuan: When are Mommy and I gonna come lif wif you?
Cornell: I don't know. ~looking at him~
JJ: Don't you wan us to lif wif you?
Cornell: Of course. It's just ya moms is not too happy with me. Don't worry though. Things will be back to normal soon.
JJ: Don't worry eifher Daddy. Mommy'll forgive you.
Cornell: You think you so smart, huh?
JJ: ~smiling at Cornell~ Yep, just like daddy.
~Cornell started laughing, picked Jajuan up, and started tickling him. The door opened and in walked Dawn.~
Dawn: I hope you don't mind, but I still have my key so I let myself in.
Cornell: Naw, it's coo. Jay, go upstairs and get your stuff while I talk to Mommy.
JJ: Otay. Hi Mommy. ~walking upstairs~
Dawn: Hey boo. Hurry up cuz we gotta get home. ~turning to face Cornell~ Soo… wuz up?
Cornell: Just wondering how ya been? When you're going to move back in? The usual shit.
Dawn: I'm doing aight. As far as moving back in that's on you, but you know what you gotta do first.
Cornell: I know and I'm working on it.
Dawn: That's good to hear.
JJ: Otay Mommy. I ready.
Dawn: Okay, lets go.
Cornell: So umm can I call you sometime? ~walking towards the door~
Dawn: ~looking at him for a moment~ Uh, yeah. It's coo.
Cornell: Coo. Bye Jay. ~bending down to hug him~
JJ: Bye Daddy. ~hugging him tight~
Dawn: Goodbye Cornell.
Cornell: Bye Dee.
~Cornell was sitting at home when the phone rang.~
Cornell: Hello!
MV: Chill nigga. It's just me.
Cornell: Oh. Wuz up Silkk?
VoShonne: Chillin. Ay do me a favor.
Cornell: Aight.
VoShonne: Click over and call Zane.
Cornell: Aight, hold on.
~Cornell clicked over and called Zane~
Zane: Hello.
Cornell: Wuz up dirty?
Zane: Wuz up Nelly?
Cornell: Nuthin. Silkk told me to call you on 3 way.
Zane: Oh. Wuz up Silkk?
VoShonne: Lonely. I miss my family.
Cornell/Zane: You ain't the only one.
Cornell: Fa sho. My moms left and I'm sitting up in here 2 inches from being paralyzed crying like a bitch.
VoShonne: Don't feel bad nigga cuz we doing it too.
Zane: So what we gon do about it? Cuz I know y'all feel the same when I say I can't take this by myself shit no more.
Cornell/VoShonne: Fa sho.
VoShonne: I was thinking maybe we'd start our own record company.
Nell/Zane: What?!
Zane: You been smoking sumthin lately?
VoShonne: Naw I'm serious. Everybody be telling us how good we rap. I think we should do something with it.
Cornell: Tru tru. I like dat idea.
Zane: Right now I don't care what kind of job I get just as long as it's legal.
VoShonne: So it's all coo?
Nell/Zane: It's all coo.
~For the next month VoShonne, Cornell, and Zane got their company almost started. They bought a building, fixed it up, and got all their equipment set up. One day Dawn and Teena were walking up to the shop and they saw a note taped to the door.~
Dawn: What's this all about? I hope it ain't a bill.
Teena: Really. ~taking it down and reading it out loud~ Hey sexy ladies, we have a surprise for you. Meet us in the parking lot of McDonalds on 55th at 7:00 pm. It's important. We love y'all and the kids. See you tonite. Love, V,C,Z.
Dawn: I wonder what this is all about?
Traci: What, what is all about?
Teena: This. ~handing her the letter~
Traci: ~reading~ OMG. You think we should go?
Dawn/Teena: Hell yeah.
Traci: Good me too.
~At exactly 7:00 pm the girls aka sexy ladies pulled up in Dawn's silver Escalade and the guys were waiting on them. They got out the car and walked to where VoShonne, Cornell, and Zane were.~
Girls: Hey y'all.
~all together~
Cornell: Hey ma.
VoShonne: Wuz up boo?
Zane: Hi baby.
~~~~~~~~~~~
Teena: So what are we here for?
VoShonne: We got a surprise.
Dawn: We know all that.
Traci: Where is it?
Cornell: We gotta take y'all to it.
Zane: So y'all gotta wear these. ~pulling out blind folds~
Traci: Why?
Cornell: Cuz we don't want y'all to see it before everything's perfect.
Dawn: Fine. Lets go.
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