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Date Posted: 11/10/09 6:22:07pm
Author: frances
Subject: Re: Co sno, about nuts
In reply to: Brad 's message, "Re: Cold Snooze" on 11/10/09 2:24:47pm

>I think I prefer it without the "I am that" but then,
>that's just my opinion, I'm not the writer, just the
>reader, it is more powerful I guess with it in.

oh i added the "I am that " with a vague sense the reader might feel THEY- or he or she is sick or being addresed. That happens lots- a reader doesn't know if there is acomplaint, personal or to world at large- or somesuch thing.
Anyway thats why I added that. I don't feel well. And I don't remember where I put my tylenol 2. lol.
ummm. other thing was....

>
>I've been sick too, literally, got a bad cough cant
>get rid of.
coughs, go to family dollar or yeah thats it- not dollar general, don't know there/// AND moocus relief- it's jus guiesifisine- you can take fearlessly- a simple- BUT MOST EFFECTIVE ! very very useful medicine!
I take the lil red decongestants at same shelf- even the new substitute ingredient of phenllyaline or whatever is good- so not stand in line. But thats sumthin i can't advise about- one can't take necesarily with other medicines and not with hi blood pressure etc. But I could not do without my lil rd pills.//// Guieffine - mucus relief I urge. They are 75% less at family dollar, (roughly.)
>overall, it's a very cute and clever poem.
thanks, seemed so to me- but i had zero sense of it being or not entertaining to another. Glad to hear my instinct s working- thats happiness!

"he might
>think last years nuts" I just don't understand that
>line, for some reason.

well it doesn't mean anything is why you can't find meaning. squirels,nuts reinforces the enviroment paints scene, nuts is silly reference to madcap or nutzo- like squirrel is going to find new friends maybe but not seriously, and I got the line from the 3 lbs of nuts that really were from last year, unshelled in a picnic basket
so I had loaned, given nuts in bag, so I poured them out on front yard beneath a newer smaller pecan tree for squirrels, and that afternoon, recently- someone took them..
at least I don't think squirrels would move so many that fast. It was a bag- full. It didn't mean much of anything- just that I keep wondering about it. Some of nuts were good , some seemed dried out. Squirrels, I figured are expert sorters at that.
Lotsa times I am confused about a line, also jokes, often it's just there is no more to it than what others are laughing at- thats all there was tio it and i am looking
too sghallow or too deeply or from some other angle or maybe on the trail of a new thought...

Doesn't make sense or convey
>anything. otter, nice reference, I get the sound
>wordplay. Now if you could just enlighten me to what
>you mean by, last years nuts

so thanks i believe I've explained above.
One thing about poetry and forums - can make a yuckoday worthwhile a little bit sometimes.

I have a cinquain to post- wrote today, given the first word- rapture to go on. So I'll post that after readibng any new postits.
I rewrote "Fractal" onetime through but not finished when I got sick sunday night, sicker today . But-

I rewrote in my INKnotebook and not finished/ is unposted.

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Replies:

Re: Co sno, about nuts -- B, 11/10/09 9:56:14pm
- Re: Co sno, about nuts -- frances, 11/11/09 5:16:24am
  - Re: Co sno, about nuts -- Brad, 11/12/09 1:32:37pm
    - Re: Co sno, about nuts -- Frances, 11/12/09 8:08:29pm