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Date Posted: 02/28/06 9:50:08pm
Author: schrebe
Subject: Re: Wishing for Rain
In reply to: B 's message, "Re: Wishing for Rain" on 02/28/06 7:49:10pm

>I like it. Dont know bout the last two lines tho. this


I think the last two lines
gives us the full image of the poem
in a summary.
So if I want to cheat on a
book-report about your poem.
All I would need to do is
read the last two lines.
For everything prior these last two lines,
it was upto the reader to figure out the imagery.
but when you add these lines to the end, the poet just comes out and tells the reader what it all means;
this can be a boring-factor for some

however

for me, I apreciated the confirmation
of knowing the magic healing of
rain

A haiku I wrote sometime back

"Manifest Thunder"

Most High falling rain
I dance barefoot - close my eyes
consume me Divine

SCHREBE

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