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Date Posted: 13:47:20 03/05/00 Sun
Author: Belamore
Subject: Re: Ezella Searches
In reply to: Ezella 's message, "Ezella Searches" on 09:52:37 03/05/00 Sun


> Ezella Searches
>
> And then my perfect world shattered for I awoke and
> the previous night's event's came flooding back. I
> sat up quickly looking about the room for the chance
> that the boy may have found his way back while I was
> asleep. I walked to the window...the sun is so
> high..near noontime. Did I sleep so long? How could
> I when there is so much to do. Hurriedly I dress in
> riding clothes. I could be burned a witch wearing
> such but I can't be bogged down with skirts today. In
> front of the looking glass I decide not to bother
> with the hair.
>
> I run to the stables and throw a saddle on Beauty.
> "Today we ride like the wind girl....much searching to
> do". Beauty snorts and shakes her head as if she
> understands. "Good girl!".
>
> I trust that Sir Dragzfuth and even von Risper will do
> their best but I cannot afford to waste time away
> waiting. The waiting in fact would drive one mad.
>
> First I rode to his favorite swimming hole the one
> where he met up with the dragon recently. But my fear
> is that he perhaps .....I shutter to think of finding
> his little body lifeless in the water. All around
> there is no sign of the lad. I breath a sigh of both
> relief and disappointment.
>
> A shadow rides across the sun. Looking up I see a
> mighty Griffin flying overhead. My eyes follow his
> path a few seconds before I mount beauty. Something
> is amiss..... for I could swear that was Janora upon
> that creature unless my eyes deceive me.
>
> I am torn between wanting to continue search or going
> back. Nickoli will no doubt be furious since neither
> Shane nor I are there to tend to things.....no not yet
> there are yet a few more places I wish to look.......
>
> to be continued......
>
>
>
> (Okay my timeline's all *&%^#$ up. I've had this
> ready though for weeks and forgot to post it...sorry
> everybody...just imagine this placed a few postings
> back :-)

No, it fits perfectly. Nice development and very urgent and compelling capture of Esella's fears and motherhood.
(So...how angry are you at me? I have 7 more contributions coming)

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