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Subject: Re: Hope (Untitled) - Chapter 1

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Nestra

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Date Posted: 17:22:43 07/21/03 Mon
In reply to: Athena4 's message, "Hope (Untitled) - Chapter 1" on 18:22:09 07/20/03 Sun

It was an irrational hope, the same hope held by everyone when they first arrive at Five.

"arrived" at 5.

A vague belief that their assignment would be short term, that within a few weeks, a month at the outside, Section would retrieve them, pull them from the Hell that was Five, and return them to the relative comfort of their lives at One.

Only people from One are sent to Five? (I honestly don't remember how you have it constructed.)

Madeline, coming from a position at Adrian�s side, had more reason than most to believe she would receive a reprieve, and perhaps that�s that was why realisation, when it came, was so difficult to deal with.

And the day to day horrors that had stolen the hopes of so many others became commonplace.

day-to-day

But to those accustomed to using Five as a sort of Abeyance, it was not only inconceivable, it was unacceptable.

I don't think abeyance is capitalized.

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