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Subject: I'm struggling with this story


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~delle
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Date Posted: 14:13:11 09/14/03 Sun
Although I really like my premise, I can't seem to make the story "come alive"; it feels much too much "tell" and much to little "show".

Any and all opinions or suggestions most welcome.

Obviously, there's much more to come. But I'm getting bogged down and quite frustrated.

Help! *g*

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