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Date Posted: 21:35:38 07/03/02 Wed
In reply to: Nestra 's message, "Identity Crisis (Part 1)" on 07:12:35 07/03/02 Wed

He's never sure whether what they pass along true information, but it doesn't really matter.

...whether what they pass along is true.... (?? something, at any rate)

Very rarely, they drag him along on a mission, when they need him to make direct contact with someone. And frankly, the missions scare the shit out of him, but he likes the unfamiliar sensation of the adrenaline making him shaky and brave.

Me, I'd lose the 'And' that begins the second sentence.

She laid a comforting hand on his shoulder as he left, and he can still feel the warmth lingering there.

Very nice.

She looks fabulous, as always. Casually rumpled and effortlessly gorgeous. Luckily, as Mick, he's allowed to appreciate that, and he's allowed to manufacture excuses to see her as often as possible. It's right there in his orders.

Double nice. I'm really feeling Mick here, and the feeling began smaller and grew, which is a neat effect.

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