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jean
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Date Posted: 22:01:41 07/03/02 Wed
In reply to: Nestra 's message, "Identity Crisis (Part 3)" on 07:30:17 07/03/02 Wed

He tries not to look to closely at the boy's face, pretty sure that he'll be dead before long.

..too...

Monique watches as Hillinger is carted off, her delicate features showing no emotion at all.

Monique or Michelle?

deal with a Section shrink 'than a "spiritual modifier,

Typos: quotes

And he spares a thought for a silent goodbye to the first victim of this upcoming engagement. It's probably stupid to mourn for someone who never existed, who was just a creation of his own mind to begin with, but he already misses Mick.

************

White desk. White walls. Gray suit.

Mick's technicolor life was a lot more entertaining.

************


Kick ASS!

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Athena
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Date Posted: 21:12:52 07/05/02 Fri

Monique watches as Hillinger is carted off, her delicate features showing no emotion at all.

Michelle

Nikita gives him a look that promises that she'd rather deal with a Section shrink 'than a "spiritual modifier, but he's saved from her disdain by the sound of the phone.

I don't think you need the " ' " before than, and you missed a quote after modifier

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