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Subject: Re: Invitation Letter?

Author:
Dor

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Date Posted: 08:18:27 07/29/01 Sun
In reply to: christina. 's message, "Re: Invitation Letter?" on 01:43:36 07/29/01 Sun

>i just typed in the suggested changes so you can see
>them in context. too bad i dont know where they are
>anymore, hah.
>

some of the changes look fine to me, like the shortening of the band info that i suggested before pasting the letter, etc... but let me comment on some other parts...

Last, but certainly not
>least, SkimMarket has generously donated two makeup
>artists who will provide you to a complimentary
>makeover. The evening
>>will also feature a silent auction and raffle for
>>thousands of dollars worth of prizes.

why say last but not least and then add something afterward?

>Thank you for your continuing support,
>>
>
>SCRE Organizers

i'd like a somewhat more enthusiastic ending, and we should definitely not abbreviate.

i also do think, for what it's worth, there should be SOMEONE's name on it. like audrey was saying it just helps if people can like attach a name to the project, just makes it more personal. i don't see why we can't print off like one sixth of our letters with one of our names, one six of them with another one of our names, etc. etc.

??

maybe?

Dor

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Invitation Letter?	christina.	12:03:54 07/29/01 Sun
Re: Invitation Letter? -- Dor, 20:25:52 07/29/01 Sun Re: Invitation Letter? -- jason, 20:37:32 07/29/01 Sun Re: Invitation Letter? -- Dor, 20:46:52 07/29/01 Sun