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Date Posted: 00:46:42 02/13/00 Sun
Author: Dimon
Subject: Re: Take me
In reply to: Chad R. Dobson 's message, "Take me" on 04:32:18 02/02/00 Wed

> Hey Chad...I think you've got this one whipped! Fantastic read, man. Consise and pure in its delivery...your words have the impact of a Kenworth rapped out, and decidedly opposed to an oncoming brick building. Great work! :)





Grey faces
> in the
> not light
>
> red facets
> of evil
> alive
>
> In my
> sanguine muscle
> beats to quickly
>
> comparable to
> when I get
> angry
>
> and slap
> things up
> around the house
>
> and grey facets
> in the room
> across the hall
>
> of red faces
> evils
> I recall
>
> Dust sticking
> like shadows
> at noon
>
> rust
> flaking like
> skin chips
>
> on clammy feet
>
> madness hibernates
> while I blush
> like fire
>
> Out there (beyond what we see)
> lumbering clumsy
> souls compete
>
> to win
> the facets
> red and grey
>
> to tempt
> the faces
> grey and red
>
> Look inside
> my heart
> just death
>
> valves
> pumping ceased
> blood still
>
> An unwanted target
> here I
> stand
>
> Shivering fetal
> in irons
> forever
>
> My face
> is white
> like December

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