Re: Love -- Poetry Grace and Insanity

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Date Posted: 12:09:22 04/08/00 Sat
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: Love
In reply to: Deadpoet 's message, "Love" on 18:44:22 03/22/00 Wed

good to see you hear, Deadpoet and this is a fine piece.
but i think the last line should be "have" and not "has"
shouldn't it?
anyway - the words come thru strong and pure to me.

*)

>
>
> Love
>
> Is like a new day dawning
> The effloresce of light
> That comes with every new morning
> Streaks across the dew
> Covered grass
> Chasing away the darkness
> And the past
> The ambrosial smell fills your senses
> The light showering your body
> Like soft amiable kisses
>
> As the day advances
> And the sun reaches into the sky
> Bringing life to all that it touches
> The flowers bloom all around
> As the trees sway in the breeze
> Love carried by the wind is a beautiful sound
>
> Storms may pass
> In the moments of the day
> Clouding the vision and the mind
> As the rain falls across the way
> Like tears coursing down
> The cheek of a innocent soul
> Whose heart wears a crown
> Of thorns from a broken love
>
> As the sun sets in the west
> And the colors radiate out
> With all of his power and zest
> Across the darkening land
> The last rays of the setting sun
> Leaves a lasting brand
>
> The night rides in
> On her silent wings
> But you can hear her if you listen
> She brings with her as she sings
> A gentle lullaby
> Telling the secrets of the quite hearts
> If you close your eyes and say goodbye
> To the lady of the night
> A new day will great you when you open your eyes
> But if you last till the morning light
> You can receive the merit of a true love
> That can last you till the end of your days
> Like two doves
> That has found their way

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