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Date Posted: 22:54:27 09/03/02 Tue
In reply to: 無分對錯 's message, "" on 09:52:12 09/03/02 Tue

「認為自己寫得好的,都不是成功的詩人.」然則成功的詩人都認為自己寫得不好嗎?至少李白蘇軾李清照不是。我認為連自己哪一篇寫得好的都不知道的,都不是成功的詩人,因為他們連判別自己的作品的能力都沒有。

一個簡單的斷句問題推而廣之成詩的對錯問題,叫人摸不著頭腦。人不是妖,詩也不用種在「不分對錯」的安全環境內培植。上詩全首斷句分行節奏與日常用語接近,突然出怪招令人感到不協調,雲提議加一逗號斷之是很正常的回應,並沒顯得雲泰山壓頂扮高人。

年齡作為生物存在於人間的時間量詞, 放在詩這個範疇,更加不倫不類.

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