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Subject: 我真係唔得呀


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sorry(請看這個)
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Date Posted: 13:50:35 09/07/02 Sat
In reply to: 葛鴻雲 's message, "感謝你的批評" on 16:17:02 09/06/02 Fri

喂,我睇d評語講得好清楚啦,尤其批評二,一針見血深入淺出;照
睇你既自白,你應該都幾清楚自己既問題(睇落係清楚既……)丫;
咁點解仲要大聲疾呼叫人黎批評你呢,係咪貼左首詩冇人理你就係人
地既問題呢,係咪就要嘈嘈閉呢,一個人係咪真係可以自我中心到咁
既地步呢,非要人地注視你不可呢。

仲有,我記得你以前已經試過叫人去「詩生活」睇你同大陸詩人既對
話架勒,當時我已經諗:「呢個人用自己黎做招牌(而唔係直接介紹
網頁,佢係咪當自己係明星呢」;幸而都冇真係睇過。而家你仲貼哂
上黎?而且似乎唔係以個別發言之精彩程度為選擇標準,而係因為同
你首詩有關,你覺得我地有興趣知,所以貼上黎喎。喂,就算我讀中
文系呀,都唔係一定要研究你不可卦?你好似覺得人地一定而且應該
對你好有興趣喎。仲要人地去睇你個幾百條留言。

你既詩我真係冇乜興趣,你可以咁樣繼續寫,但係我唔會鍾意——當
然,你做乜要我鍾意呢?既然我唔勉強你寫成我鍾意咁樣,咁你可否
留翻少少空間俾我,唔好好似鏟埋黎「你做乜唔理我你做乜唔理我」
咁呢。

我亦都諗過,你會唔會唔係自我中心,而只係「想大家睇下大陸詩人
點評詩」呢?喂咁真係好指導者勒,麻煩你喎。如果要睇詩評我會唔
會自己書呢?何必要你老人家操勞。何況,叫大家睇下人地點評詩,
都唔一定要搵自己做例子卦。


我打呢段野個陣都諗過我係咪太激,但係,我覺得我真係頂唔蒲
喎。而且我整段留言以廣東話寫成,你的大陸詩友大概看不懂,總
算是給你留了面子。如有得罪,真係sorry,你唔好太難過;不過,
不吐不快呀。

(照我睇,你要在璇筠句詩中加個逗號,其原理就同你「不能去掉『在』字」一樣。)

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