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Subject: 你想講清楚


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我就再講清楚些
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Date Posted: 00:40:37 09/13/02 Fri
In reply to: 注視!注視!很需要很需要大家的注視! 's message, "等我都黎一次自我reply先" on 00:12:19 09/13/02 Fri

有詩的語言沒有詩的味道...
葛先生忽略分行在誦讀時的節奏和語調, 詩歌配合詩人思考過程的猶豫和徬徨, 感情在平凡語言中表露的速度, 在詩的節奏, 語感, 情感和速度是葛先生需要注意的.

-- 這是針對事的--

我記得你以前已經試過叫人去「詩生活」睇你同大陸詩人既對話架勒,當時我已經諗:「呢個人用自己黎做招牌(而唔係直接介紹網頁,佢係咪當自己係明星呢」;幸而都冇真係睇過。而家你仲貼哂上黎?而且似乎唔係以個別發言之精彩程度為選擇標準,而係因為同你首詩有關,你覺得我地有興趣知,所以貼上黎喎。喂,就算我讀中文系呀,都唔係一定要研究你不可卦?你好似覺得人地一定而且應該對你好有興趣喎。仲要人地去睇你個幾百條留言。
你既詩我真係冇乜興趣,你可以咁樣繼續寫,但係我唔會鍾意——當然,你做乜要我鍾意呢?既然我唔勉強你寫成我鍾意咁樣,咁你可否留翻少少空間俾我,唔好好似鏟埋黎「你做乜唔理我你做乜唔理我」咁呢。

--這完全是針對人的,到底有幾多人和你有相同的感受令你覺得有很多人同意你的說法? 在我看來葛批評人應加逗點而遭來抨擊他的詩觀或態度,他再貼一首根本預算會捱批,再貼上別人的評語也不過是多幾個參考。讀文學每有參閱多家評注的研討方法,他的動機如何和他的做出來的結果無關,(例如你不想殺人而殺了人,你想殺人而殺不了人),兩樣混埋來踩就是人事不分,你可以否定他的為人或不理會他的貼詩但他做出來的不一定錯,所以你在最尾加上:--

(照我睇,你要在璇筠句詩中加個逗號,其原理就同你「不能去掉『在』字」一樣。)

--的結論就顯得你別有用心,再加上話乜野我也考慮過是否太激所以專登用廣府話來寫叫做留d情面俾你(話大陸詩友大概看不懂喎)就更加虛偽乞我憎兼當大陸人係老外唔識睇廣東話,你針對他的行逕而我針對你的行逕,公平得很。

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