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Subject: 給鄧小樺: (補充)


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坐塔人
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Date Posted: 09:15:47 06/28/01 Thu
In reply to: 坐_塔_人 's message, "給陳小君,鄧小樺,小二的同學,小三的桌椅,小四,好久沒手痕,及其他是你的你:" on 07:14:43 06/28/01 Thu

為免你覺得我「又」避重就輕沒回應你的一些論點,這裡按你的列點排序再補充一下:

1. 上文大致都回應過了,不贅。

2. 我對「沒有定名」是執著的,但並沒咬著不放,在很久沒貼詩的欄下除了最後的回應外我沒有撩起過「定名」的問題,一直跟張大秋或誰誰胡扯的都是詩意不詩意的問題,集中得很。我沒有漠視誰的內容,這網上我除識得一個張大秋一個芷韻外其他的我不知有幾人?哪個是你?哪個是你想我回應的觀點?這正是我執著名字的原因,失覺了,讓誰覺得被漠視了,卻是你們定的規矩。

3. 這個網上的一大堆名字和句子般的代號人物,我除了用「這一代的廿幾歲」和「大學生」外還可以用什麼更穩當的稱呼?說到上綱上線,你在前文擺我的比起我擺你們的更多吧,當你說到「其實你的意思是…」時,…不贅了。

4. 有些事你弄錯了,我對張大秋沒什麼惡感,故作痴狂語有時也不過是一種表達方式而已,我也曾儘量用他的語言跟他嬉鬧,三十歲貪玩的口沒遮攔的也大有人在,我貪玩的意味也更大於諷刺。借他來攻擊什麼,車,大家後生仔麻甩佬,鬧你就鬧你,駛鬼問人借?

5. 我不敢說半句朦朧的話,我唔識,你錯當我是店小二了。這個人頑固如牛,很多新類型的新詩都接受不了,何況「朦朧」?我行文可以很粗鄙,卻不會連糞便也津津樂道,回味再三。他對我寫的什麼什麼,也從來看不上眼。他的偶聞,不是連我也罵了?!

6. 老葉的抄作已分析得夠清楚了,在散漫裡享受自由,如人飲水,冷暖自知,本來就通順得很,喻意鮮明,硬加些鹽換造甘苦,是方太生活廣場的煮法。縱浪化大中,不喜亦不懼,應盡便須盡,無復獨多時,我無知,我沒讀過。怎麼好法,你解得通,我服你。張大秋慣於找些生僻的古句裝人彈弓,我在清水灣詩社也見過一次,你也不用攬上身。

7. 我欣賞你對於新詩的熱愛和擔當,張大秋胡言亂語背後暗地裡也下了不少苦功,這是喜歡挑起戰火的代價吧,正如坐塔人工作了大半天還把最後的小半夜交給你了,只為爭拗何必如此。大家都是喜歡文學的人,文無第一,各抒己見,客氣話,兩免了。

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>坐_塔_人:)

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