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Subject: 我都冇搞錯喎


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Date Posted: 09:30:33 07/02/01 Mon
In reply to: 真係古典意象新詩喎 's message, "喂原來我冇搞錯喎" on 10:23:35 07/01/01 Sun

這詩有個副題,請看請看
「那夜在水塔上吹笛」,看到了看到了
那夜是92定93,記不起記不起
伯宿有班男仔,中文系哲學系商學院理學院
晚晚吹笛,吹咩
中大的宿舍古色古香,有亭也有庭
原來這是古典意象,不錯我是老餅
也不明白什麼是古典新詩,原來是古典意象新詩
你介紹的書我會看,即管看看他的意象有幾古典
今夜開始我會常坐在一堆花塔餅上
誠惶誠恐,怕一下子吃得太多
消化不良

(嚴正聲明:我絕不承認這是詩,我有更好的,暫不讓你們看:p)

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