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Subject: 喂原來我冇搞錯喎


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真係古典意象新詩喎
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Date Posted: 10:23:35 07/01/01 Sun
In reply to: 那夜在水塔上吹笛 's message, "只顧胡扯,忘了貼詩" on 20:34:35 06/25/01 Mon

>你不知道
>我曾踏月而來
>吹清婉的竹笛向你窗邊
>點綴你夢鄉的路
>
>窗下你猶在嫣嫣莞爾
>輕輕的喚著誰的名字
>庭外落花自有旁人打掃
>我何必驚你安眠


這詩所營造的的確是古典意象
很簡單,只要幻想一下詩中場景發生在現代城市,尤其是高樓大廈林立的香港
一切就會很不合理
例如香港的樓宇很少有「庭」
竹笛更是神奇

我不是說這樣寫不合理或者荒謬
但這種詩的確是像古裝片,我們不可以用現代日常生活的語境來揣度
所以稱為古典意象派

坐塔人先生覺得有什麼不合理的地方嗎

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