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Subject: Re: 沒有你說的那麼差勁喎


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有些地方的節奏還是讓人喜歡呀只是不能算最巔峰吧了(nt)
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Date Posted: 10:25:10 07/23/01 Mon
In reply to: 會不會寫不下去?作者 's message, "再看一次連節奏也覺得不好了。(nt)" on 12:53:07 07/22/01 Sun

>>七月
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>>我答應我的土地上要開滿盛長的花,因為雙生的血脈糾纏,以
>?>>帠n弱的善意。七色的薊草,細長堅執的,長年永遠一直開到?>?>>的土地盡頭,氣息足以召喚所有未被唱過的愉悅歌謠,變幻了
>?>>備x鵡的蝴蝶。要有這些。
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>>而夢境夜夜襲來:灰色的角落裡我拖著長不大的辮子,胸膛裡
>?>>穸X的魔幻藤蔓所封閉的光線與呼救聲,只震破我的耳朵--時?>?>>失控,所有的玻璃在我手中破爛。都有這些。
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>>以歌聲借代呼叫,以隱喻替換血痕,靜靜安坐,手指交疊置於
>?>>奶W,我等待,身上的青紫終於構成光線的顏色。而後來我的?>g
>>地終於開了我無法形容的花,我夢見。

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感動的期限:其實會不會是這樣呢?很累了, 所以都不知道自己打的東西大家能不能看明白. 對不起.10:55:51 07/23/01 Mon


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