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Subject: 貼詩


Author:
阿五
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Date Posted: 08:05:28 07/27/01 Fri

《妳並不適於節奏
── 給妳,在嗎?》

妳並不適於節奏
妳是句逗,

我懷疑過我們是親近的
仿著妳的節奏
妳是句逗,
我,摸索妳的節奏

巴士浪著浪著
我望著妳浪著浪著
妳還是句逗浪著

不認識妳的人
也看見妳是句逗

意符的消失,在今日
妳,就是句逗。

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喜歡這首的節奏. (NT)紅雲18:12:57 07/27/01 Fri
嘩,阿五總係咁勁。(nt)不如去投稿丫02:53:03 07/28/01 Sat


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