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Subject: 《懷念雪》,新作一首,請大家批評


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紅雲
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Date Posted: 23:49:20 07/29/01 Sun

請大家不要客氣,放懷批判.


◎懷念雪
葛鴻雲

現在,盛夏的清晨
陽光以螞蟻的小足爬過窗台
在老家,村子邊上的竹林
蟬詠會像魔術師的鋸子一樣
神奇無比。大暑剛過
而我卻懷念冬天
陽光如細雪。細雪如陽光
鋪於光陰之上
冬夜裡,雪花離開天庭
摸黑趕至人間,她們的腳步
輕盈,足踏空氣的聲音
唯有在夢裡才可聆聽
那是飄自天上的白氍毹
青女下凡的嫁妝,在家鄉
十二床緞子棉被
曾是最豐盛的嫁妝
回想久遠的童年,冬天
在我居住的江南農村
雪落下時,萬物綿長的呼吸
似乎讓時間停止流動
在多少年前所堆的雪人
和所滾的雪球裡
雪,企圖以白色,純洁背後的
死亡,來征服世界
在一瓣雪的形成過程裡
我走完雙十年華
提前見證人世白頭
十年之後,記憶的南方
一場大雪從南半球空運而至
日子紛紛揚揚,我困坐
一瓣雪的中央,懷念雪
迷失於時間的六座出口

2001.7.30
【香港十年系列】

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沒有人批就點名啦 (NT)紅雲06:04:29 07/31/01 Tue
請來閱讀我和國內詩人的對話,紅雲23:56:02 07/31/01 Tue


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