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Date Posted: 20:52:50 02/09/00 Wed
In reply to: 譚 's message, "搖旗吶喊,豈容有失(總是無法把詩寫得很長很長)" on 14:21:33 02/09/00 Wed

我記得以前和你談過如何制造含混和歧義,最近我發覺我又忘了
一定要看你的詩才能比較好地記起。
「慾念友愛」有些古怪,有人會因為這一句說這首是哲理詩
雖然這麼多弔詭的確鋪展了哲學人生的味道

忘了告訴你,〈逆流記趣〉我最近翻看,有些新體會。我一向都看得太快了。

> 〈宿舍播放音樂〉
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> 能力無法書寫
> 一個模式被建立可被理解
> 溫柔不會靜止
> 一如張力溫柔
> 時間向左擺\開
> 空間在垃圾堆中無法宰制
> 一切下一刻就傾倒
> 創作重複重複
> 壓抑前行
> 男人是女人的是我沉迷的
> 居住環境紀念當時
> 信念不信靠
> 感情僅可依附
> 痕跡腐爛
> 食物沖上岸上
> 流聲刪改猜測
> 照片撕裂將來
> 慾念友愛飄泊
> 疾病和醫生浪遊
> 眼停止孤單
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> 只差一步就抵達盡頭
> 非掉頭再來一遍不可
> 沒有原野也沒有黑暗和大海
> 這樣和所有
> 這樣就是所有
> 我不再聽到我不再

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