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Subject: Re: Love Triumphs


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The Madpoet
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Date Posted: 14:15:51 12/31/01 Mon
In reply to: Stephen Cooper 's message, "Love Triumphs" on 12:43:55 12/31/01 Mon

very nicely done coop, holds good meter throughout the poem the only thing i didnt like is the last line....it isnt bad but i know you could do better...i would love to see the last line slam into my heart and close the poem with a bang

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Re: Love TriumphsTina16:55:10 12/31/01 Mon


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