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Date Posted: 21:54:17 11/24/03 Mon
Author: Anon
Subject: Hmm .. Several thoughts on this one..
In reply to: Spin 's message, "Chapter Seventy-three" on 18:13:46 11/24/03 Mon

Welcome back its good to see more of this its been a favorite of mine since the beginning. And I'm enjoying it enormously..

I am enjoying the Gabe/Faith dynamic enormously their too cute together and I'd like to see Faith with someone that has a gentling effect on her inner scars as well. But I have to confess to finding myself impatient for Sara and Ian interaction to finally occur with so much left unspoken and now occuring I'm anxious they connect before Ian's psycho twin decides he wants the Weilder for himself.

I'm also curious as to why Ian doesnt know Sara is around him now since previously he's always been able to sense her no matter where she is? Have I missed that explanation or has the reasoning/explanation yet to occur?

I am also curious to see Ian's reaction when he learns their deliberately keeping Sarah's presence there from him. I confess this makes me the most uncomfortable because it smacks entirely too much of Irons actions dictating to Ian what he will and wont be privey to regardless of the why's and what for's on why their doing it ...If I was Ian it would piss me off to a degree worse than when Irons does it because they know how much this type thing has damaged him via Irons for it to be done to him by someone that supposedly loves him and should know better would be heartbreaking. *shrug* so we shall see if Ian has truly learned anything from this experience and stands up for himself or continues to be a doormat...


Also find myself curious about which approach in the talking event Faith is going to take since if she tries the bully bad ass approach it will work as well for her as it did Irons. NADA.

Sarah doesnt take bullying or interference worth a damn which is why so much of her mistrust of Irons spills over on to Ian. And since Ian lets it happen/or does nothing to change it the situation remains ongoing.

Faith butting her nose into things none of her business in Sarah's book will make Sarah even more unapproachable another reason Irons continually fails and Sarah continues to mistrust Ian. Soooo since it would benefit them all if Sarah trusted her I admit I'm curious as all get out about what happens next if there is some true enlightement and productive steps toward mutual trust or just another cliched female cat fight which most writers seem so fascinated with when they bring two strong willed female characters into a story..

I look forward to seeing what route you take.. Hope this helps in some small way in deciding if your characters are coming accross as they are meant to, the story, theme, character intepretation, etc it was an honest from the gut reaction from my own perspective as I could get to the chapters and the story over all..

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  • Yeah!!!! You're back. Great addition...more soon I hope:) (NT) -- Pezzini, 23:35:53 11/24/03 Mon
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