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Date Posted: 21:36:21 09/25/01 Tue
Author: AngelOfire
Subject: ***OHW WINNER FOR TUESDAY 9/25 IS MORCASTLIN WITH "DAMN IT MAN" !!!****

oh wow all!!~~
was a tough one !!~~

but Mor, you won because:

your poem was very natural through out, yet profound.
there were barely any to no 'skips' in the 'flow' of the poem when incorporating the assigned words and phrases. it just read so very naturally, passionately and REAL!

it was an enjoyable, clear and understandable read which would never need to be 'explained' that it was "written for a contest therefore it had this and that..." ... your poem was perfect as is, would stand alone outside of this contest as a well constructed and 'natural' poem from the great artist from which it came!!

just all around great work morcastlin!!~~ i look forward to more as i am sure the rest of AngelOfire's REalm does!!~~

love
AngelOfire

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