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Subject: Re: Butterfly


Author:
Lori S. Maynard
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Date Posted: 19:53:12 01/23/02 Wed
In reply to: Ratt 's message, "Butterfly" on 13:11:16 01/19/02 Sat

"Gone is nothing, though nothing's
quite gone-
leaving everything empty,
and all else
undone."

I liked the ending to this, sort of contradictory in a sense. Leaving things empty; and yet, leaving things the same.

Great description the of moth upon the spider's web and the desribing the sky as cruel and gray. I feel that really set the tone for this poem. Dark.

Lori

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