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Date Posted: 22:46:17 08/02/05 Tue
Author: Nicole S. Washington
Subject: Re: Female Singers Who Needs R&B Songs To Sing...
In reply to: Star Quality 's message, "Female Singers Wanted" on 18:59:52 12/30/03 Tue

Nicole S. Washington
2223 South Saint Louis Ave
Chicago, IL 60623
Phone (773) 521-4885
nicole_shanta7@yahoo.com

Hello I am an inspiring R&B song writer, I was wondering if you could take a moment of your time to review one or a couple of my lyrics for a free evaluation if possible. To see if I have what it takes to become a successful songwriter and if you like what you see or not could you send me some helpful songwriting tips to improve my lyrics. And if not could you consider sending my lyrics to another company for further consideration for a career is songwriting. Thank you once again for the time you have taken to review my lyrics a well as this short letter.

I’m Tired Of You
(Verse One)
Boy, you know you got some nerve
Comparing me to your past whenever we have
An argument but I see that you’re still having second
Thoughts about us so if you want to leave just go
Right ahead be ‘cause
(Chorus)
I’m tired of messing with someone who isn’t down for me
I’m not going to go on no longer pretending to be happy
I’m going to leave you alone before I do something I might
Regret so boy if you want it this way just leave me alone
Be ‘cause I’m really tired of you so leave me alone…
(Verse Two)
Now that I got you off my chest I feel that I could move
On you mean nothing to me now so whenever you see me
Don’t even come my way just act as if you never even
met me boy you had the very best and you gave it all away …
(Bridge)
You thought you knew me but you really didn’t I really thought
We were going to be soul mates from the start but I guess my
Heart must’ve changed directions





I’ll Take Your man
(Verse One)
I been peeping you and your man
Since you first walked in the club and I must say
Looking at your man makes me want
To claim him right away and I see you looking
At me checking out your man if you want to mess
with me I’m a let you know that ….

(Chorus)
I’ll take your man if I see that you’re not
Taking care of him the right I’ll beat you down
Just to show you I don’t take no shit
I’ll make you remember not to ever mess with me again
I’ll take your man I’m not here to cause trouble
But if I see what I want I’ll make it a mission until
I have what I want so remember …I’ll take your man

(Verse Two)
You better step back and stop trying to act so hard but
I see that you’re so deep in love I’ll leave you along
Because I’m looking way to cute tonight but to all the rest
Of the ladies up in here if you man looks good enough
To me you better watch your man carefully be ‘cause I‘m here
And ….
(repeat chorus)

“Bye- Bye (It’s Over)”
(Chorus)
your lost, you had your chance
There were to many times I’ve forgave you and
You hurt me I’m not going to take it no more
So forgive me for wanting to better myself so
bye - bye It’s over bye - bye I’m not going to
waste my time on you no more so
Bye-bye (it’s Over)
(Verse One)
Time after time I let you mistreat me
And disrespect me I always love you unconditionally but
you mistaken my love for something else I can’t go
on no longer it’s time to pack my bags, walk away
Hope in my ride
‘cause it‘s …(Repeat Chorus)

(Verse Two)
I hope you’re happy with the way things are now
How could you do me this way I was more than just your
World when ever you came around me I felt like you
Cast a spell on me but I’m glad that I came to my right
Mind be ‘cause I’m a find someone who’s just right for me
So once again … (repeat chorus)



“I’m Wondering (if I still need you)”
(Verse One)
I don’t know how many times I’ve told myself
That I was going to let you go but there’s was something
In my heart telling me to give you one more chance
But I can’t stand being hurt no longer and I’m ready to
Get out this situation so I’m gone now but I’ll always remember
The good times we had oh …

(Chorus)
I’m walking away wondering if I made the right decision
I’m Wondering (if I still need you) ‘cause I’m still hurting inside but
Whenever I feel I need to talk I’ll call you
I’m Wondering (if I still need you) I want you to know that
we’ll always remain friends I going to miss the way you held me,
kissed me in all the right places I’m Wondering (if I still need you)
but in a couple
I need this time to myself ‘cause baby
I’m Wondering (if I still need you)

(verse two)
It’s crazy to me when I sit back and think about how
Young we fell in love we thought we had it all I loved
Every minute of our relationship and never took it for granted baby
But I guess nothing good lasts forever and if that time comes
Again I’ll be here but right now I need so time to myself to think
About us and where I really want to be…(repeat chorus)

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