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Date Posted: 16:40:56 05/08/02 Wed
Author: a player
Subject: hmmm...
In reply to: Rach 's message, "A player cont.>>" on 12:31:55 05/07/02 Tue

Ya, in the first chapter you were really rushing, it seemed... But since the chars that were in that chapter weren't gonna make it anyway, I thought that worked out well... I was in a rush when I read the story, originally, and didn't pay close attention to it, and that's why I said that... But mainly I was referring to the part with Jorptin Trynt, and how he was suddenly dragged into the story and called Jorptin and off in a few paragraphs... That's what I meant.

Well, they play a key part, and you really don't have to, but it would have been nice to get some background on the space stations. I'm probably the only one who would think about such a thing, and wonder on it, so... :) The stations may play a key part, but you could always let the small pictures add up into the big picture...

Anywho, chapter 2 was even better than chapter one, in my opinion. Keep it up, honestly - I luved it. It was more descriptive and more easily understood than the first chapter... Excellent... :)

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