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Subject: Re: wait wait wait im not done yet Author: Nick [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 00:46:12 04/06/02 Sat In reply to: Nick being human 's message, "Re: sounds like a decent compromise (shit damn spelling)" on 22:40:04 04/05/02 Fri ok now to talk about sages rewrite, wow umm... sounds like a bad buddy movie in my opinion (no offense) but just because you see two people have sex doesnt really mean you become best of friends and i like how he clarifies that the street girls are called hoes and at 14 being able to own a store is hard seeing you cant get into contracts and also he has been bounty hunting and lived on the streets and death is a hard thing to deal with at 14? i would think he would have more of a harden attitude from being on his own like that and at 5 you dont know much about getting food i mean you cant live at 5 on the streets without a real parent and i hope this character cant read or write but i like the ending being turned into a hollow soulless shell life like that will dothat to someone but the earlier stuff is a bit umm.. unrealistic and where did he all of a sudden get his ship? sorta odd he is really good at shooting when first picking up a gun too never firing it espicially for a 15 year old and i am guessing he has a very very large amount of guns... for a reason or another so many he cant even count thats probably cause he really cant count well im guessing but i do like the "i will see you in the light" reminds me of one of my favorite lines "we will meet in a place with no darkness" George Orwell 1984 plus good paragraph form my english teachers would be proud ill say it again though i do like the artwork there is some real talent there (coming from me who cant even draw stick figures this is why i keep with film requires no drawing) [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date My now detailed input Drake McClellan 08:37:11 04/06/02 Sat Clarifiction!! -- Sage Samui (SS), 22:04:33 04/06/02 Sat Re: ok some more points -- Nick, 17:43:16 04/07/02 Sun Re: ok some more points -- Sage Samui (SS), 18:23:18 04/07/02 Sun Re: ok some more points -- Sage Samui (SS), 10:36:33 04/10/02 Wed AHHH!!!! -- Sage Samui (SS), 10:39:26 04/10/02 Wed