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Date Posted: 05:32:51 08/09/02 Fri
Author: Mateogrin
Subject: Re: Velveteen
In reply to: Name (required) 's message, "Velveteen" on 05:08:32 08/09/02 Fri

This is nice. I like it. Its like two pictures of the same scene seen from different perspectives. I'd like to see more of it though. A little bit more character development and a little more so that we can understand that the needy housemaid is happier than her lady. I also really like how you show that they are both in positions of submission. The housemaid is because it is her job, aka her life to serve this woman. And the lady because to be in the "in crowd" that she loves so dearly (or does she) she must be submissive to a set of rules and she must do things that if she were just being who she wanted to be she would never do.

I enjoyed analyzing this. :) Thanks

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