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Date Posted: 10:17:55 06/04/02 Tue
Author: Zora
Subject: Re: Chapter 1
In reply to: Krystal 's message, "Re: Chapter 1" on 09:06:39 06/04/02 Tue

Yeah I think we'll switch. I'll put an exercise on the other forum... Getting inside the characters heads is admirable, but usually people restrict themselves to one or two protagonists. If you're going to switch around a lot, you need a very formal structure to compensate, or cues as I said before, which warn the reader that they're about to be dropped into someone else's shoes. I'll try to find some examples of this done well (I'm no good at it myself!).

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