Date Posted:20:15:30 01/28/02 Mon Author:novae Subject: Re: A bit of my story In reply to:
ridcully
's message, "A bit of my story" on 19:00:27 01/28/02 Mon
That was good. Quickly into the thick of things, that is always good. But it could be improved by working up a little more atmosphere. It just is missing a little something.
But dont get me wrong it is still good writing, keep it up. :)
