Re: Silent Snow -- Write On Poetry Forum II

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Subject: Re: Silent Snow

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sue

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Date Posted: 05:36:47 04/25/02 Thu
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In reply to: Carly Svamvour 's message, "Silent Snow" on 09:01:25 04/21/02 Sun

>Hi folks! I found Jim on one of the other poetry
>forums last night and he directed me here - here is my
>latest poem that I'm working with - your comments will
>be appreciated.
>
>Silent Snow - 2002
>
>Cats eyes
>rubber hose
>plants on window sills
>
>The world behind my eyes sings its joy
>
>Sometimes whole forest regions
>roll beneath my wings.
>
>An open door pops up - I honour
>the invitation, walk into a white
>world. I find myself in a place
>that's been calling to me
>for some time now.
>
>Silent wings
>Silent footsteps
>Silence in fresh fallen snow

Beautiful! love this piece, hope to read more like it

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