Re: Come Play Me Again -- Write On Poetry Forum II

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Subject: Re: Come Play Me Again

Author:
Hope

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Date Posted: 21:04:58 05/03/02 Fri
Author Host/IP: i187-217.nv.iinet.net.au/203.59.187.217
In reply to: Carly 's message, "Re: Come Play Me Again" on 22:20:53 05/01/02 Wed

Carla I always leave poems as I wrote them , thats the way they came from heart and mind and I never change
Hope

>>In whispered thoughts
>>Fingers play magically
>>Through night he sings
>>Enchantment harmony
>
>THROUGH 'THE' NIGHT HE SINGS
>
>ENCHANTING HARMONY
>>
>>Of each musical chord
>>The serenading I float
>>Embrace sweet sound
>>In caressing each note
>
>THROUGH SERENADES IF FLOAT
>>
>Very sweet and poignant, Hope - speaking of 'hope' - I
>hope you don't mind my wee bit of critiquing.
>
>Carly - wildcity@vif.com

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Subject	Author	Date
To Hope - Sorry about that	Carly	07:43:51 05/05/02 Sun
Re: To Hope - Sorry about that -- Hope, 09:29:05 05/05/02 Sun