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Subject: Re: Please Take Care

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Wanda

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Date Posted: 14:44:37 03/01/02 Fri
Author Host/IP: NoHost/208.223.120.222
In reply to: Hope 's message, "Please Take Care" on 06:49:49 02/27/02 Wed

Hope; There is such a sadness here in this poem. If this is really happening in your life, I wish you well. You certainly have a wonderful talent, and I always enjoy reading your work. Wanda

>Please Take Care
>
>Attempting to let go
>Sat here and cried
>With heart aching
>Too often I tried
>
>Attempting to let go
>Not being rushed
>Sinking so slowly
>Heart is crushed
>
>Attempting to let go
>For hours I wept
>Reading the mail
>Each one I kept
>
>Attempting to let go
>Still I am waiting
>The final plunge
>Too devastating
>
>Attempting to let go
>I fell into despair
>I am on my way
>Please take care
>
>Hope �2002

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Re: Please Take Care	Jim AKA Rapid-Fire	04:53:16 03/06/02 Wed