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Subject: Re: Black Secrets

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 20:28:19 03/07/02 Thu
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In reply to: Nicole (AKA RAVIN) 's message, "Black Secrets" on 16:45:50 03/06/02 Wed

Is the word "haunt" suppossed to be in the line, "voices of my grave my mind day and night?" This was well expressed and I can relate much. Loved the 2nd line! I enjoyed the darkness of it, it's nice to read once in awhile :)

>The darkness holds my deepest secrets
>As ravens scream through hallowed walls
>The fire burns in my blackened soul
>Leaving me wondering when my chains will fall
>Sanity holds my mind at bay
>As waves of tears stream down my face
>My blood stained memories streak across the sky
>Tired and alone, I�m left to die
>I have dreamt of a life beyond my own
>Where the heavens may lift and the grief may fall
>Voices of my grave my mind day and night
>Satan�s rules are my future
>Hell�s fury controls my soul
>Born to suffer, my blood turns cold
>Falling into darkness, grabbing for light
>Nothing can stop my secrets coming out

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Re: Black Secrets	Jim AKA Rapid-Fire	13:03:43 03/10/02 Sun