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Subject: Re: �A Poets Opus�

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 17:36:06 11/08/01 Thu
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In reply to: Mac 's message, "�A Poets Opus�" on 19:17:46 11/01/01 Thu

Very good Mac! Nice images and well written. Such a creative title too!

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>The words were musical notes
>left lilting on a gilded page
>some to rise quick on high
>above even glass shattering range
>or to fall slow deep down below,
>lower than resonating bass may lie
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>The lines were the rhythm
>to provide a therapeutic throb
>the cascading metered lines
>crafted with studied hand
>even the interlude of stanza
>interjected with purposeful pause
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>The resulting composition
>pondered lyrical pulsation
>a poets undulating opus
>left twisted on tongue

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