Re: Reflections -- Write On Poetry Forum II

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Subject: Re: Reflections

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Date Posted: 18:39:01 11/09/01 Fri
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In reply to: Nicole(A.K.A. Ravin) 's message, "Reflections" on 05:04:59 11/01/01 Thu

I so relate to this! Very good and well expressed Nicole!

>I see a girl in front of me
>As the day is slowly dying
>She looks so sad and lonely there
>As though she has been crying
>
>I ask her, "what's the matter?"
>But she only stands and stares
>Perhaps she's locked inside herself
>Because there's no one else who cares
>
>Those teary eyes pierce through my soul
>Imploring, "how did it all go wrong?"
>Mourning for the love that's lost forever
>And asking, "now where do I belong?"
>
>She looks so very frightened
>So lost and all alone
>Where will she find the strength now
>To make it on her own
>
>I reach out my hand to touch her face
>To comfort and console her
>But all I touch is a cold hard place
>It's just the reflection in my mirror

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