Re: Take me Home- Ode to a Warrior -- Write On Poetry Forum II

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Subject: Re: Take me Home- Ode to a Warrior

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Date Posted: 17:43:41 02/10/02 Sun
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In reply to: Antipodi 's message, "Take me Home- Ode to a Warrior" on 16:46:21 02/10/02 Sun

A lovely, well written poem. Very poetic and I enjoyed the read :)

>A burning boat upon the sea
>A warrior lost twas what I be
>For now my life has left the shore
>My heart beats here no longer more
>Don't cry for me for I have loved
>I 've looked, blue skies above
>Now all I want, to sleep evermore
>Hold me fast,deep within loves door
>Believe I was and will always be
>A true man of the sea
>
>Born a child become a man
>I tried to live the best I can
>Happy times and sometimes sad
>Believe me life has not been bad
>I learned of love and all of its woe
>Yet she still says she loves me so
>Do not be sad,for I am at rest
>I am at peace and I am blest.
>Now its time for me to go
>So burn the boat and let me so
>Winds and sea, companions be
>Just take me home

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