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Subject: Re: From the streets to the fields


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Lori S. Maynard
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Date Posted: 08:30:47 09/19/01 Wed
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In reply to: Black Marvel 's message, "From the streets to the fields" on 16:32:44 08/14/01 Tue

This sounded like it is a lyric; however the broken rhyme at the end sort of threw off that feel. I do like the rhyme scheme that you were using at the beginning! :)

Lori

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Re: From the streets to the fieldsMoonchild09:24:24 09/19/01 Wed



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