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Subject: Re: Gold Medallion

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 11:20:17 09/21/01 Fri
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In reply to: Trisha A. 's message, "Gold Medallion" on 09:45:48 09/21/01 Fri

This rhymes and flows very well. Made it a pleasant read. I like the dragon parts!

>Gold Medallion
>
>I saw a crystal dragon
>Rise from a crystal sea
>And from that crystal vision
>I saw a crystal me
>
>I wear a gold medallion
>Laced about my neck
>And in my paths destruction
>I leave mystery and wrecks
>
>I slay the evil shadows
>That try to take my love
>They walk in space and darkness
>Attacking from above
>
>The sword from my holster
>I flay them one by one
>It sparkles with a glitter
>Brighter than the sun
>
>Upon the swords so perfect
>I see an emblem there
>A warrior of great beauty
>With streaming flowing hair
>
>The letter is so perfect
>It stands above the rest
>An engraved letter W
>To prove I am the best
>
>I see a crystal dragon
>Fighting till the last
>To make a name in history
>To leave a memory of the past
>
> Trisha A. �/01

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Gold Medallion	Trisha A.	15:03:56 09/22/01 Sat