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Subject: Re: Restless Soul

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 19:30:35 09/25/01 Tue
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In reply to: LM 's message, "Restless Soul" on 14:29:35 09/25/01 Tue

Dark and haunting. Sad and well written and sounds like you were writing about me, scary. A great read!

>days of waiting, not knowing her own destiny
>thoughts not her known, merely images painted
>from shattered dreams
>in the distance she waits,
>her mind fading off to no where
>her cigarette for thought slowly burns to ashes
>a remembrance of days wasted
>she chokes back her crying thoughts
>as the strong taste of nicotine burns her throat
>so restless is her soul
>how long can a heart torn into a million pieces hold
>on?
>and again silence lingers,
>her pleas to unleash her longings
>had fallen upon deaf ears
>she disrobes from her street clothes
>the feel of cotton pj's remind her of comfort
>starring at an empty bed into a sea of unfulfilled
>dreams
>her thoughts now drowned in desperation
>another damned cigarette for thought
>as she is relieved of time
>and now embraced by darkness

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