| Subject: Tragic Car Ride- everyone has to read! and please respond if you have read! |
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Raquel
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Date Posted: 05:31:58 09/22/02 Sun
Raquel, Renee, and Bogsdan were on their way to Fantail Creek to move their horses and ponies to their new barn. They left their driveway and turned the corner to Fantail Creek. It suddenly started pouring outisde, making it almost impossible to see the road. All of a sudden a car came straight at them, with no control. Raquel slammed on the brakes, and swerved, but it was no use. They were spinning and swerving, and the car hit the edge of theirs. Raquel, Renee, and Bogsdan were all terified. The car went rolling down a hill at a harsh speed. Bogsdan was in the back seat with his sister, hugging her and holding her. They were both crying. Raquel reached her hand back, and the three were holding hands, and were going through this together. After what seemed a lifetime, their car stopped. It had hit a tree, and the passageners were all very badly injured. Renee had hit her head on the window which had broken, glass shattering everywhere. Bogsdan was thrown from his seat to the floor, his head being beaten too. Raquel went flying, and half of her body went through the front window. Bogsdan finally got his voice. "Renee? mom? are you ok?". He got no response, and realized they had both been killed. "I love you both very much." and slowly he clsed his eyes, and joined his family.
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